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Proof Reading

Discussion in 'Tutorials' started by Zannador, May 6, 2016.

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  1. Zannador Trainee Engineer

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    Hi Keen,

    I have played through tutorial and have few suggestions to improve the training material which you may like to consider:

    Tutorial 1

    Step 2) - Text panel says to look at the bottles and press "F" but the key for picking up items is "T"
    Step 3) - O2 generator text panel says to look at the hatch and press "F" to access its inventory but the key for this is "T"
    - Might want to reword the last phrase to "Drag the empty bottles you picked up in the last room to the oxygen generator's inventory on the right side of the screen, it will automatically fill them up to 100%"
    - The text panel for opening the airtight hangar door refers to the "F" key but it should be "T". "F" seems to be tied to the jump feature, like spacebar.
    Step 4) - Text panels refer the the "F" key but "T" is the key for this action.
    Step 5) - Text panels refer to "F" key but it should be "T" key.
    Step 6) - Text panel refers to key "F" but it should be "T" key.
    - May want to reword the last phrase to "Cockpits need to be conveyor connected to a generator, farm or tank to supply oxygen and hydrogen"
    Step 7) - Text panel refers to "F" but it should be "T" key.
    - Might want to reword the first phrase to "Press "T" whilst looking at the cargo container's conveyor hatch"
    - For some reason "CTRL" + Left click is not working, it has changed to "CTRL" + Right click (is this a bug?)
    Step 9) - Might want to reword the text panel to "Access the cargo container below to pick up components and welder. Drag or "CTRL" click them to your inventory"
    - Sensor Dialogue 06 is turned off and doesn't seem to have any function.
    Step 10) Might want to reword the first phrase of the left text panel to "Add the welder to your toolbar in the same way as the grinder"
    - Might want to reword the right text panel to "Repair the button panel below by selecting your welder and holding "Left Mouse Button". Once repaired, press "T" to use the buttons"
    Step 11) - Might want to reword the first phrase of the left text panel to "Access the cargo container to add the hand drill to your inventory"
    - Might want to reword the first phrase of the right text panel to "Add the hand drill to your toolbar in the same way as the grinder and welder"
    Step 12) - Might want to add a second phrase that says "Hold "Left Mouse Button" to mine and collect. Hold "Right Mouse Button" to demolish"
    - Might want to reword the text panel above the door to "Press "T" on the door or control panel to open the door. Yellow highlight indicates interaction area"

    Regards,
    Zannador
     
  2. SF-1 Raptor Junior Engineer

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    They changed the standard "action" button to "F". I switched mine back.
     
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